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| p.1 #5 · New to Senior Pics critique please |
I don't do any senior work, so take all of this with that in mind.
This may sound extra harsh, but you obviously spent some time thinking about locations and care for the students so take my critique in the best way possible. I think this is a solid set. As mentioned, you did a good job scouting our some areas with nice backgrounds ahead of time (brick wall, foliage, fence, bridge?, locker room, etc.), and did a good job getting him in consistent light. However, almost all of the photos are center composed with a similar look and it almost feels like he could have been photoshopped into each subsequent scene. For all of the good areas, you didn't take advantage of interesting lines/light/foreground elements that could add further interest to the photos. In addition, the smiles feel forced and only one felt real. For me, 12 was the most interesting and original of the group.