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Oct 10, 2012 at 01:04 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Relaxing


very nice and interesting, but the obvious, does the large bottom half serve a purpose?

Joe



Oct 10, 2012 at 03:26 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Relaxing


Thank you for your comment Joe,

My mistake is that the tittle is disorientating.
The photo was taken last week and with the emptyness at the botoom I tried to show the end of the summer it is like the scene is closing.




Oct 12, 2012 at 03:50 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Relaxing


kalliakm wrote:
Thank you for your comment Joe,

My mistake is that the tittle is disorientating.
The photo was taken last week and with the emptyness at the botoom I tried to show the end of the summer it is like the scene is closing.




I really enjoy this image and I actually got the intended feeling when I first looked at it. Cheers!



Oct 12, 2012 at 05:27 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Relaxing


interesting you can mind read

Joe



Oct 12, 2012 at 05:33 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Relaxing


kalliakm wrote:
Thank you for your comment Joe,

My mistake is that the tittle is disorientating.
The photo was taken last week and with the emptyness at the botoom I tried to show the end of the summer it is like the scene is closing.



It is a great composition then, and a creative idea, I like it!

But I would change the title because without visual clues one is left to mind read or guess as to your intent. At least imho

Joe



Oct 12, 2012 at 05:34 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Relaxing


This is one of those shots that really doesn't fit convention yet I cannot stop looking at it. Well done.

John



Oct 16, 2012 at 07:53 PM





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