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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Spokane Braves vs North Okanagan


Shot these at the Spokane Brave's game last night, quite a few fights!
CC is welcome and appreciated, shot with Canon 5d3, 70-200 2.8 II





  Canon EOS 5D Mark III    EF70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM lens    155mm    f/2.8    1/1000s    3200 ISO    0.0 EV  






  Canon EOS 5D Mark III    EF70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM lens    200mm    f/2.8    1/800s    3200 ISO    0.0 EV  




Sep 30, 2012 at 08:14 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Spokane Braves vs North Okanagan


Brian....welcome to FM Sports Corner. These are pretty nice looking shots. I have some recommendations for you.

These display pretty large so I'd recommend somewhere around 800x600...that way those with laptops will be able to see the images without scrolling much.

Number your images so they could be used for reference when commenting.

Post more than 2 when looking for critiques.

These two have some dead space so tighter cropping could be applied. I re-cropped these as an example.

The horizons are off on the ones you posted so the ones that I re-edited were adjusted as well.

Your exposures were pretty spot on and your whites were good as well. Sometimes there is the tendency to blow out the whites to get good facial exposures. You did a great job with both.

Nice work here.
Frank





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2 - re-edit




Sep 30, 2012 at 08:43 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Spokane Braves vs North Okanagan


^+1 to Frank's comments and re-cropping...

Chris



Sep 30, 2012 at 10:12 PM
 

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Spokane Braves vs North Okanagan


Thanks guys!


Oct 01, 2012 at 02:38 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Spokane Braves vs North Okanagan


My agreement with Frank aside, the first shot is a definite stock keeper for any story about fighting in hockey. Well done.
Sean



Oct 01, 2012 at 02:43 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Spokane Braves vs North Okanagan


It was actually an all out brawl, 4 vs 4 fight. You can see one of the refs laying on the ground in the foreground of the first shot, and a stick on camera right. it was quite the scene!


Oct 01, 2012 at 02:58 AM





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