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| p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · First Ice Hockey photo session - C&C - photo heavy |
Sorry to add to the fire here, but yeah, I'd knock future posts down to your top 10-12 images instead and get feedback from there. #, #9, #10, #11, #14, #18, #19, #20, #21, #22, and #23 really don't do anything for me and I'd leave them out altogether, and then the rest would have made for a really enjoyable set.
As already mentioned, most are a little underexposed for my tastes. You've really preserved the ice and for me that's not what makes a hockey shot, it's the faces and details in the players. Compare your exposure in #1 with #3... #1 to me is just about right... nice white ice and lots of detail in the players, #3 comes off dark and lost detail to my eyes.
Regardless, a lot to like. A few would benefit from going a lot tighter too as they're just plain cropped too loose. You have potential for some great isolation shots, like in #4 with two players, but there's a lot of dead space around the players that would have made for a great tight shot if cropped down.
Pretty solid IQ, decent timing on some, so now just work on getting the timing down a little better and get a little more exposure in-cam and you're well on your way!
Going a little tighter on the players:
Keep at it! CHEERS....