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Archive 2012 · Brooke Casual
  
 
Dneufarth
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p.1 #1 · Brooke Casual


C&C always appreciated.

Thanks, Derek





















Edited on Sep 22, 2012 at 05:48 PM · View previous versions



Sep 22, 2012 at 01:33 PM
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p.1 #2 · Brooke Casual


Nice pop of color.


Sep 22, 2012 at 02:10 PM
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p.1 #3 · Brooke Casual


Hi D,

A few quick comments:

She looks like a nice subject to work with on photos (I remember her from the image you earlier posted).

image 1: I don't like the tilt, and the framing seems a bit too tight to me.

image 2: I don't like the position of the hat (making her look "thicker" in torso).

image 3: i don't like the tight composition. Would prefer to see more hair/head in the photo. Her hair looks nicely coiffed, so I would show more.

I hope these Quick Comments help you.



Sep 22, 2012 at 05:46 PM
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p.1 #4 · Brooke Casual


1 & 2 lack expression, a problem I normally have when shooting so now I recognize it more easily.
Agree with steady in regards to the hat in 2.
3 & 4 use too narrow a DOF leaving her far eye too OOF. These tight crops would prob look better with both eyes in focus.

Kevin



Sep 22, 2012 at 11:51 PM





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