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That's an interesting set to look at, mate. I agree that the variations in processing are distracting. I think there's a lot to be said for consistency in processing within a set -- choosing two or maybe three ways of looking at images that give the viewer some way to predict and recognize why you made a processing choice but that still speak as a set.
That bride is interesting in black and white, but in vivid color she's smashing -- the red hair and blue eyes would, I think, benefit from a bit of saturation (not unnatural saturation, but just a bit of emphasis there because color is a really big part of that girl's look).