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Welcome to FM !!!
FM ROCKS !!!
I like the color play of the gold vs. blue in the last one, as it is picking up the color from the sky. I don't like the blue cast on the log, so you might consider selectively adjusting the color balance @ the log to either neutralize it a bit, or even take it to a warmer tone. I realize that it was picking up the tones form the blue sky, but the golds are strong enough that it might work nicely warmed up also.
I like the composition of the first one with the interplay of nature and industry. As usual for me, I'm not diggin' the blue tones in the neutrals (i.e. blue smoke, etc.). The lower the sun gets in the sky, the stronger the blues come out to play. Some people dig it, some not so much. I find that as a subject the blues are interesting, but as the source of illumination for other subjects it bothers me more than most.
The second one is my least favorite of the set. I get the colors in the sky as being really nice to experience in person, but for some reason they don't translate as well here ... might have to think about this one a bit. The composition, doesn't offer a lot ... similar to the third one, but the third one has more dominant color play. The second one's color play isn't quite enough to "carry the scene".
Like Karen said, the water is nicer in the last one ... I'd like to have seen a blend of the first one's compostion with the style of the last one's water. Also, I might consider a vertical/portrait orientation @ the first one.
Anyway ... looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Welcome to FM !!!
FM ROCKS !!!
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