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I see your photo post has had 100+ views and no comments from viewers.
I know that can be disappointing and often discourages people from posting/participating in a forum like this, especially when the ASK for comments so they may improve.
So, I will post a comment or two and maybe that will get others to contribute their views too.
As with anything where a subjective view (opinion) is shared, there can be many views of the same issue or subject.
She has a nice smile.
The expression captured is nice and appealing and because this is a close up it gives the impression of a friend in an intimate conversation (close).
So, a nice photo of a nice looking woman.
What don't I like?
I don't care for a few things about the composition and what else is shown in the scene (background).
But, those are minor things.
Getting the expression right is most important, and you got a nice one.
I hope these comments help you.