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Last year I visited Bodega Bay and seemed to have great luck with my photography. This year I am struggling to come away with a few images I like. Here are a few tries at pulling something out of the foggy days. As always comments and suggestions are appreciated. I still have another day or two here to keep trying.





Fog on a hillside near Bodega Bay







More Fog north of Bodega Bay







A break in the fog north of Bodega Bay




Sep 17, 2012 at 06:07 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Bodega Bay Fog


Nice series.
Second is my favorite. Not only do I like the pure BW, but you have additional interest and balance provided by the couple and the bird. Nice job on the exposure as well.
Third is overprocessed to my taste. A bit too crunchy and the colors do not look right to me, although I wasnt there. HDR? Comp itself is nice.
Scott



Sep 17, 2012 at 11:59 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Bodega Bay Fog


+1 @ Scott


Sep 17, 2012 at 01:21 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Bodega Bay Fog


+2 @ Scott.


Sep 17, 2012 at 01:50 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Bodega Bay Fog


I cut back a little on the saturation and eliminated the final sharpening. Does this look better?







Sep 17, 2012 at 04:37 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Bodega Bay Fog


Much better, and my fav of the group.


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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Bodega Bay Fog


Much better, but still looks somewhat over processed to me.

#2 is my favorite as well.



Sep 17, 2012 at 08:00 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Bodega Bay Fog


Better but I think its still overprocessed too.
What about posting the original?
Scott



Sep 17, 2012 at 08:09 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Bodega Bay Fog


#3 RW is still way too hot to my eye.

#2 is quite nice - wouldn't be the same gull as in #3 would it? Seems out of place in #3.

Regards,

Bob



Sep 17, 2012 at 10:04 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Bodega Bay Fog


+1 to Mister Bean


Sep 18, 2012 at 01:05 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Bodega Bay Fog


Bob Jarman wrote:
#3 RW is still way too hot to my eye.

#2 is quite nice - wouldn't be the same gull as in #3 would it? Seems out of place in #3.

Regards,

Bob


Bird belongs in #3 but needed to be lowered into the frame. Bird was imported into #2.



Sep 18, 2012 at 01:20 AM





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