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Personally, I find #2 to be awkward. While I'm not sure what she is doing with either hand, her left one is particularly curious.

Also in 2, the latex looks a bit baggy around her right ankle, which kind of flies in the face of what latex should be. Some wrinkles are OK, but just look at the difference between her two calves in that shot. One is curvy, the other lumpy.

I am sure latex is a huge learning curve, and I have no first hand experience. But I would say watch where the wrinkles land. Some of them are perfect, and add to the texture of the clothing. But others, like in number 4, on her left leg, just above her knee, I think would look better pulled flat. In contrast, the wrinkles in this same shot around her ankles are nice.

Number 5 is a torso. I would like to see the same shot with hands on the hips perhaps.

Generally I find the dark background to be a bit much with the dark outfit. I think the ones with the white background work much better.



Nov 20, 2012 at 10:23 PM
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DTOB wrote:
Personally, I find #2 to be awkward. While I'm not sure what she is doing with either hand, her left one is particularly curious.

Also in 2, the latex looks a bit baggy around her right ankle, which kind of flies in the face of what latex should be. Some wrinkles are OK, but just look at the difference between her two calves in that shot. One is curvy, the other lumpy.

I am sure latex is a huge learning curve, and I have no first hand experience. But I would say watch where the wrinkles land. Some of them are
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Thanks for your comment. I have touched up #2 a bit on the latex. Is this any better?
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Nov 21, 2012 at 10:37 PM
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p.2 #3 · p.2 #3 · Persia - NSFW?


Maybe it's because my eye was drawn to it before, but it still doesn't look right to me. The shape of her calves just aren't the same. One more thing is that the seam on her left leg is picking up the light perfectly, on the other leg, not so much.

It is better, but maybe just keep it in mind for next time.



Nov 22, 2012 at 12:03 AM
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p.2 #4 · p.2 #4 · Persia - NSFW?


DTOB wrote:
Maybe it's because my eye was drawn to it before, but it still doesn't look right to me. The shape of her calves just aren't the same. One more thing is that the seam on her left leg is picking up the light perfectly, on the other leg, not so much.

It is better, but maybe just keep it in mind for next time.

Yeah I will keep that in mind if I ever going to shoot latex again in the future.
How's this version? : )

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Nov 22, 2012 at 10:22 AM
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p.2 #5 · p.2 #5 · Persia - NSFW?


Actually, that is MUCH better. If I hadn't seen the original, I wouldn't know that you had fixed anything. Photoshoping latex looks difficult, you've done an excellent job.


Nov 22, 2012 at 01:43 PM
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p.2 #6 · p.2 #6 · Persia - NSFW?


Awesome work. Thanks for sharing



Nov 27, 2012 at 03:06 AM
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p.2 #7 · p.2 #7 · Persia - NSFW?


#2 is the best!


Nov 27, 2012 at 02:12 PM
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jdevarie wrote:
Awesome work. Thanks for sharing

Thank you



Nov 28, 2012 at 09:34 AM
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p.2 #9 · p.2 #9 · Persia - NSFW?


Number 2 or 2c fit right...nice shots...great model...great post-production...


Nov 28, 2012 at 01:59 PM
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great work here.


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DTOB wrote:
Actually, that is MUCH better. If I hadn't seen the original, I wouldn't know that you had fixed anything. Photoshoping latex looks difficult, you've done an excellent job.

Thank you, thanks for the suggestions for improvement



Nov 29, 2012 at 07:38 PM
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p.2 #12 · p.2 #12 · Persia - NSFW?


Very nice....


Nov 30, 2012 at 04:48 AM
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love 5 :-)


Nov 30, 2012 at 07:08 PM
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tc95 wrote:
Number 2 or 2c fit right...nice shots...great model...great post-production...

Thank you



Dec 02, 2012 at 12:51 AM
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p.2 #15 · p.2 #15 · Persia - NSFW?


Very done !
I like your work.



Dec 02, 2012 at 04:46 AM
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p.2 #16 · p.2 #16 · Persia - NSFW?


jdevarie wrote:
Awesome work. Thanks for sharing

Thank you and thanks for viewing.



Dec 04, 2012 at 07:07 PM
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p.2 #17 · p.2 #17 · Persia - NSFW?


This thing looks quite comfy
Like #1 and #5 most.



Dec 11, 2012 at 02:24 PM
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p.2 #18 · p.2 #18 · Persia - NSFW?


In #2, you might consider using the liquify or clone tool to slighly lift the saggy area under her left armpit.


Dec 12, 2012 at 12:50 AM
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p.2 #19 · p.2 #19 · Persia - NSFW?


NO no and No again man


Dec 13, 2012 at 12:43 PM
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p.2 #20 · p.2 #20 · Persia - NSFW?


Great shots.

Nit picking - Excess reflections in some shots in the trousers are distracting.



Dec 13, 2012 at 12:54 PM
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