Bob Jarman Offline Upload & Sell: On
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p.1 #4 · Fire and Ice - Sunset over Steamboat Lake | |
Paul,
Starting with Ben's re-work, crop from bottom to just where reddish tones begin in water, and from left at or near the left side of the last peak.
This moves the waterline below mid-frame and broadly leaves three loosely equivalent areas horizontally: water, silhouetted shore/mountains, and sky/clouds.
To me, the bright areas at left and bottom - water and sky - detract from the basic image.
My 2¢
Bob
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