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Bob Jarman
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Spotted in Oregon, appreciate comments re concept, processing, etc...

regards,

bob






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  NIKON D2X    12.0-24.0 mm f/4.0 lens    12mm    f/8.0    1/80s    200 ISO    -0.7 EV  






  NIKON D2X    12mm    f/8.0    1/100s    200 ISO    -0.7 EV  



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Sep 01, 2012 at 12:24 AM
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The first works better for me than the second. I like the way the doors line up.

The light across the floor in the second does not work well for me.



Sep 01, 2012 at 12:55 AM
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Pretty much everything Ben said. Additionally, I would have liked it if the transome of the closest door to you wasn't cut off. And perhaps it could have been straightened up a bit using the Perspective Tool?

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Sep 01, 2012 at 01:19 AM
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Thanks guys - the place was pretty much a mess, I'll try some other variations. Also color.

Here is an exterior...

Bob




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Cool place.
I really like the first. There is much to discover as the eye scans the first room, richly textured disarray, then moves further in.
I like the second but agree with the others that the bright light across the foreground detracts.
Looks like a great place.
And I would cross-post the first to BW. Ther more you are there, the more you post, the more others will respond. And the image is strong.
Scott



Sep 01, 2012 at 01:42 AM
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sbeme wrote:
Cool place.
I really like the first. There is much to discover as the eye scans the first room, richly textured disarray, then moves further in.
I like the second but agree with the others that the bright light across the foreground detracts.
Looks like a great place.
And I would cross-post the first to BW. Ther more you are there, the more you post, the more others will respond. And the image is strong.
Scott


Thanks Scott,

Glad you like it. I'll modify slightly and post to BW.

Yes, neat place, the location in its day likely the middle of a vast, cultivated area near Culver, OR.

I was hoping to find some autos, implements, etc. during the trip but only minor success. Most were on posted, fenced property and I had no time to pursue access. Still, a fun time.

More to come, one a series of ~10 images portraying an encounter that I don't quite know how to encapsulate into fewer images. That, later this weekend.

Regards,

Bob



Sep 01, 2012 at 01:35 PM
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The color works for me because of the green grass beyond. Otherwise it would be almost a toned monochrome.
Scott



Sep 02, 2012 at 02:25 AM
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The color conveys so much more info here. I like it.


Sep 02, 2012 at 02:31 AM





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