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I like your idea. However, like Matt, it's OOF and doesn't work for me. That last frame has to be sharp.
I agree with Ian. The WB is really off and its not sharp at all. One thing I would suggest would be putting the camera on a tripod, and doing a bulb exposure through the play, and manually flashing towards the end of the play/layup. That would give you some blur (hopefully), and a nice popped exposed play. (But I don't know if the blurred image would even be exposed enough to make it work?) I'd even have the camera behind the rim and shoot vertical rather than side-scrolling action...where he's coming at you rather than running past.
The first thing that I thought of was the Usain Bolt photo:
I say all this not to be a turd, but to encourage you to try it again and tweak it. It could work, it just needs some more work.
You say you're a teenager. I have to give you props for getting out there and making images. Come back here often and read and ask. There's a lot of great dudes here who would love to teach a young guy not only how to get great images, but how to not be that guy running everybody, then yourself, out of business