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p.1 #1 · The Baby at the Harbor


HMS Bounty, Mayflower II at Plymouth, MA
With the LensBaby.

Which work for you?
Suggestions?

Thanks,
Scott



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Aug 26, 2012 at 11:23 AM
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p.1 #2 · The Baby at the Harbor


First & Last ... although I'd like to see a different color of toning on the last one (it's kind of a "sickly" color @ pale & yellow/greenish, imo) ... maybe something about 1/2 way to the first one or maybe a morning blue (vs. cyan). I do like how it kinda looks like it is "coming about" out of the fog, and now headed back into the fog (even though it is pierside).

Nice job with the baby ... its' a tough sell to get me to like most things I've seen come from them.

I'm not diggin' #2 at all. #3 if you the toning wasn't quite so "rich", maybe lighter pastel or less saturation I'd like it better.

As a set, 1,3,4 could be nice ... but likely could benefit from some work @ having the toning less "disjointed" ... if that makes any sense.




Aug 26, 2012 at 12:38 PM
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p.1 #3 · The Baby at the Harbor


Kent,
I agree with your feedback about the toning/saturation. And of having a uniform toning for display as a series.
Not really trying to do a series at this point.
The bluish tone was definitely too intense. I dialed it back, perhaps not enough.
the sickly yellow I dialed back a bit too. Looking for an antique-y look.
Scott



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p.1 #4 · The Baby at the Harbor


Not having a clue about the style here, I would have to say Rusty is on the right track. The last is the most pleasing to me.


Aug 26, 2012 at 02:10 PM
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p.1 #5 · The Baby at the Harbor


Diggin' the tweaks on the toning for 3 & 4 ... might play with #1 just a touch (not much) softer like you dialed back on #3.


Aug 26, 2012 at 07:34 PM
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p.1 #6 · The Baby at the Harbor


One or three, ... probably three because I like the flags.


Aug 26, 2012 at 08:36 PM





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