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dgillyerek
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · how to present (crop) this image


I really love the brides emotional outburst as the ceremony finished up. Struggling a little bit with this one but maybe I've been staring it at it for too long. I think the problem is I wanted to grooms head in there but the justice of the peace is in the way. There is just way too much going on in the background between the justice of the peace and brides maid head / flowers. Any ideas? Has to be 2 right?
(this probably belongs in critiques but figured the expertise here would help more.)

original:
http://derekgilbertphotography.com/temp/1.jpg

crop 1:
http://derekgilbertphotography.com/temp/2.jpg

crop 2:
http://derekgilbertphotography.com/temp/3.jpg



Aug 22, 2012 at 04:16 PM
Jon-Mark
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · how to present (crop) this image


To be honest, I don't like the bridesmaid arm coming out of the bride's head.

I would crop close to the back of the groom's head, removing the officiant.



Aug 22, 2012 at 04:19 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · how to present (crop) this image


more like this?
http://derekgilbertphotography.com/temp/4.jpg

unfortunately I just don't think I have the pixels to go landscape



Aug 22, 2012 at 04:23 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · how to present (crop) this image


How about a change to the aspect ratio? I have no idea why the colors got all screwed up but:







Aug 22, 2012 at 05:20 PM





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