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Hi all,

Took this at a festival at the weekend. Think I'm reasonably happy with it, but curious to gather some critque to improve it further.

Comments welcome!

Ben






Edited on Aug 20, 2012 at 07:58 PM · View previous versions



Aug 20, 2012 at 07:18 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Fire Thrower


Looks ok to me, maybe you could take some off the bottom?


Aug 20, 2012 at 07:36 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Fire Thrower


Consider tightening the composition and opening the shadows a bit:







Aug 20, 2012 at 08:15 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Fire Thrower


As Karen wrote "Consider tightening the composition and opening the shadows a bit:", then illustrated.

Scott



Aug 20, 2012 at 11:29 PM
 

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Fire Thrower


sbeme wrote:
As Karen wrote "Consider tightening the composition and opening the shadows a bit:", then illustrated.

Scott


++2 I would consider brightening the man up even more...



Aug 21, 2012 at 01:07 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Fire Thrower


Cheers all - agreed.
Certainly worth bringing the shadows up a touch.




Aug 21, 2012 at 11:44 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Fire Thrower


Perhaps a touch of noise-reduction..?


Aug 22, 2012 at 01:43 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Fire Thrower


Looks like the noise has ramped up in the Jpeg conversion, there is a touch in the original raw, but yes - the jpeg above looks pretty noisy!


Aug 28, 2012 at 04:36 PM





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