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jsbeith
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · One more for C&C


I would like suggestions on how to improve my skills.
Camera was a Nikon D60 and the lens was a Nikon 50mm 1.4G.

Thank you for your time and assistance.

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Scott

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Aug 12, 2012 at 05:19 PM
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And when you want us to look at multiple images, post them both in the same thread. The FM rule is one new topic/post per day in each forum. But you can post multiple pictures in each topic/post.

I hope this helps. And welcome to the forum!



Aug 12, 2012 at 05:22 PM
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Thanks again for the guidence.
I will definitely follow the rules. Sorry for the violation - that was not how I intended to start my time here.

Scott



Aug 12, 2012 at 05:28 PM
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It's really not that big of a deal, most people aren't aware of it when they first join. You can go to your original post, click on the edit link, and then add the image tag and your pic will now be imbedded in your original post.



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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · One more for C&C


Now I am up and running. Thanks again!

Scott



Aug 12, 2012 at 07:58 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · One more for C&C


I like this image. No objection to the composition, pose, processing DOF. Great looking woman.

There will be comments about the hair in her left eye.

The one feature that detracts, in my view, is the white window jamb that erupts from her head. Had the window not been on axis with her head, I'd have no objection. Since the drainpipe in the BG already adds interest, the window jamb could probably be eliminated without rendering the shot too sterile or contrived.

John Caldwell



Aug 13, 2012 at 04:24 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · One more for C&C


The color of the brick is very overpowering to my eyes. Try to de-saturate the entire image see if you like it. Maybe even a BW version would look good.


Aug 13, 2012 at 04:31 PM
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Thanks John and Michael. I appreciate the help.
I might have a B&W version floating around somwhere.




Aug 14, 2012 at 02:14 AM





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