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p.1 #1 · First photo submission for C&C


This is my fist photo submission for C&C. Please help me improve my limited skills.
Camera was a Nikon D60 and the lens was a Nikon 70-300 VR. SB-600 for fill.
Any tips or assistance would be greatly appreciated. Please let me know what I did correctly (if anything) and incorrectly (needing improvement).

Thanks for your time and opinions.

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Scott

Edited on Aug 12, 2012 at 07:56 PM · View previous versions



Aug 12, 2012 at 04:53 PM
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Issues I have identified already are the hot spot on her shoulder, the bit of her left forearm in the bottom right corner, and the hot spots in her hair.


Aug 12, 2012 at 05:04 PM
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You'll get more views and responses if you imbed the picture in your post. In MM, I believe you just use the image tag -- you'll find the link below the pic.



Aug 12, 2012 at 05:21 PM
 



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p.1 #4 · First photo submission for C&C


Thank you for the help. I appreciate it.

Scott



Aug 12, 2012 at 05:26 PM
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p.1 #5 · First photo submission for C&C


As regards the African American shot, unless you’re trying to establish a location she was shot in, the upper part of the tower is a distraction, even though its blurred out. IMHO. Next time, might have an assistant hold a black scrim off camera to tame the sun off the left shoulder.


Aug 12, 2012 at 08:01 PM
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p.1 #6 · First photo submission for C&C


Thanks Bert - just what I am looking for.


Aug 12, 2012 at 08:22 PM





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