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I like the running outfit shot the best - I like the use of light and shadow and contrast in that shot.
I'm pretty much a total newbie to portrait photography, and I am taking classes on post production, so feel free to take what I am about to ask with a grain of salt.
Just out of curiosity...
Does she have a black eye in the first few photos, or is that just how the light source used cast a shadow?
If she doesn't have a black eye, maybe post processing could be used to paint in some exposure on that eye to brighten it up a bit perhaps?