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| p.1 #6 · Carrie and kids first FPJ attempt |
The playground shots are ok. As said before, a lot of repeats. Also, in quite a few, their faces are obscured. This works sometimes, say in #2 but not #3. However, the composition in #3 is a lot stronger.
I like #9 but the boys face bring OOF spoils it slightly. I'm not sure why it's OOF as he appears to be in the same focal plane as his mother?
I don't really feel any involvement in the hide and seek ones. I've been advised before to get involved in the action and I think that would have helped here
As a general observation on the set, the colours, exposures, and b&w conversion are all great. Quite a few could do with their verticals correcting and keep an eye on stray limbs etc dangling on the edges of the photos
This is all just my uneducated opinion, so take it all with a pinch of salt