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The processing on the last one on the right to de-saturate the shot really doesn't help IMHO. I'd process the page the same, even a B&W on a page with color shots can be a bit much. Also I guess I'm not a fan of the deathly pale zombie skin tones.
On a positive note, I like the two solo shots you have of them on the last page, I'd have made them much more prominent (larger).