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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Marrissa in Red


This is high school senior Marrissa. We had a blast and this young lady is one unique senior. Thanks for looking!






















Aug 09, 2012 at 03:26 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Marrissa in Red


can't say I like the poses in the 1st and 3rd photos and the hand/arm position in 4 and 5 but the lighting is nice in all of them and 2 and 6 are great


Aug 09, 2012 at 03:52 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Marrissa in Red


Love that last one!


Aug 10, 2012 at 03:47 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Marrissa in Red


6 is a great shot and 2 being an awesome shot.


Aug 13, 2012 at 09:04 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Marrissa in Red


1b and 3a for me very nice.

Dave



Aug 14, 2012 at 01:43 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Marrissa in Red


Pretty face.
love the last one!



Aug 14, 2012 at 03:43 AM
 



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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Marrissa in Red


Your off camera flash images pale far in comparison to your naturally lit images (or your OCF is very inconsistent). I think 1a/b is a great example - the hard shadows of an unflattering, diffusionless (or poorly diffused - i assume hotshoe flash on a stick?) light does not flatter your subject at all for a, whereas the gorgeous soft light, flattering angle and tones in b are high caliber work (the opt out of a bold lipstick colour doesn't hurt either). I would work on the consistency of your flash work for future images - 1b compared to 2 look like completely different photographers took them.


Aug 14, 2012 at 01:47 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Marrissa in Red


With the possible exception of the first two images (forehead/cheeks a touch hot) excellent lighting and what appears to be a very relaxed subject. I'd keep her number handy if you ever have the need for product or scenario model.. tks. for sharing


Aug 14, 2012 at 02:29 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Marrissa in Red


Dave_E wrote:
1b and 3a for me very nice.

Dave



+1 really nice shots.

Hatch



Aug 14, 2012 at 05:09 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Marrissa in Red


I also love 1b, 3a and the last shot. Beautiful girl, great smile and on a side note, I just love her hair.


Aug 14, 2012 at 05:36 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Marrissa in Red


Some nice stuff in there. I agree that the lighting is not very consistent. I like 1b, 3a and the last one.

Barefoot at that abandoned house in last image? Looks kind of dangerous!



Aug 14, 2012 at 07:07 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Marrissa in Red


Wish the comments made sense. Which one is #3? No numbers, some say a & b etc.
What's the point of putting 2 together (the first two, for example?) Do you want us to look at both at the same time? Is one supposed to distract from the other? (It does).

Hope this helps.

Now that I've got that out of the way, there's some really nice work here.

The first pair of shots, left - I think the shadow could be cropped away and improve the shot. She'd be larger in the frame, which would be good.
Love the hair and sharp eyes of the first pair of shots, right side. Very nice expression too.

2nd shot - She's blending into the background and the background that would have prevented that is on our left. Black against that greenish background would have been nice.

3rd set of shots, upper. (See how a simple # would help?)
She looks great. The arm looks large, however. Maybe without the arm to the head would be even better.
Lower shot - She's very centered in this one and also very small. She's the star of the show, so she should be larger in the frame. Minimize the background when you can and maximize her.

Last shot. She has a great smile in this one. It does show her as heavier than she is, however. So not flattering.

Again, some really nice stuff. Take the comments as minor points to consider for next time.








Aug 14, 2012 at 07:29 PM





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