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Wish the comments made sense. Which one is #3? No numbers, some say a & b etc.
What's the point of putting 2 together (the first two, for example?) Do you want us to look at both at the same time? Is one supposed to distract from the other? (It does).
Hope this helps.
Now that I've got that out of the way, there's some really nice work here.
The first pair of shots, left - I think the shadow could be cropped away and improve the shot. She'd be larger in the frame, which would be good.
Love the hair and sharp eyes of the first pair of shots, right side. Very nice expression too.
2nd shot - She's blending into the background and the background that would have prevented that is on our left. Black against that greenish background would have been nice.
3rd set of shots, upper. (See how a simple # would help?)
She looks great. The arm looks large, however. Maybe without the arm to the head would be even better.
Lower shot - She's very centered in this one and also very small. She's the star of the show, so she should be larger in the frame. Minimize the background when you can and maximize her.
Last shot. She has a great smile in this one. It does show her as heavier than she is, however. So not flattering.
Again, some really nice stuff. Take the comments as minor points to consider for next time.