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i really like this because it seems more about the fine details of this woman's body than just a modeling head shot of some sort
the texture of her skin, the unevenness of her teeth, the shape of her finger nails, etc. it makes you want to explore her surface (there's a new one...)
i too really like that you didn't over process her skin, however i think you could go a little easier on some of the other processing. sharpening and adjustments to the eyes in particular. i don't think you need to make any major change... just dial it back, make it more subtle.