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hadji
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p.1 #1 · Xenia Natural beauty 2


Your comments please.I hope some improvement.
Soon I will be using off camera flash.
Thank you







Aug 06, 2012 at 09:37 PM
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p.1 #2 · Xenia Natural beauty 2


Cool Floral


Aug 06, 2012 at 09:38 PM
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p.1 #3 · Xenia Natural beauty 2


Beautiful young lady. Don't know how comfortable you are with PP in photoshop or lightroom but if you were to "dodge her image (face, hair, dress, shoulder, arms, etc) to lighten her image it would pop her out nicely. You could obviously remove the shadow under her chin and crop the image just a bit. All that will vastly improve your image. As you also know proper lighting with OCF would make a world of difference but the image as is can be nicely upgraded. Love the background.

Dave



Aug 06, 2012 at 09:51 PM
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p.1 #4 · Xenia Natural beauty 2


You need to allow the background to go soft. It pulls attention from the subject. Way too flash looking.


Aug 06, 2012 at 10:08 PM
 



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p.1 #5 · Xenia Natural beauty 2


Good looking young lady. Good focus on her eyes, I think though that the background looks rather flat. Off camera flash could help this.
Douglas



Aug 06, 2012 at 10:11 PM
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p.1 #6 · Xenia Natural beauty 2


Hi everybody.
Thank you very much for your comments



Aug 07, 2012 at 08:12 PM
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p.1 #7 · Xenia Natural beauty 2


lol Pfiltz

She's cute, you should retry this using off camera flash. I think that would work out much better for you!



Aug 07, 2012 at 08:20 PM
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p.1 #8 · Xenia Natural beauty 2


jefferies1 wrote:
You need to allow the background to go soft. It pulls attention from the subject. Way too flash looking.


Exactly this^



Aug 07, 2012 at 09:57 PM





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