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Excellent presentation, and here's my $0.02...
1) nice composition, lighting is a bit flat and skin feels overprocessed (compare skin on hand to skin on face...looks like two different photos...and people)
2) love this one 10/10
3) dead eyes...you need to get a reflector or some kind of light into her eyes, and it's a little too contrasty...shadows feel too crushed
Overall, a good start!