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p.1 #1 · Hannah - Feedback please (be gentle)


OK, sticking my head above the parapet - first time posting for C&C

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Cheers!



Aug 06, 2012 at 06:37 PM
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p.1 #2 · Hannah - Feedback please (be gentle)


Sorry, asking for CC and being gentle doesn't work IMHO..


Aug 06, 2012 at 06:53 PM
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p.1 #3 · Hannah - Feedback please (be gentle)


Ha! Fair point Ed... asking for honesty then!


Aug 06, 2012 at 06:56 PM
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p.1 #4 · Hannah - Feedback please (be gentle)


1 is my fav. 3 my least fav. I like putting the hair behind the shoulder on the shoulder which is closest to the camera to expose the neck and jaw line. Post work on face is a bit much for my taste......Have you tried darkening the rocks on number 2 to create a slight silhouette around subject? Might be nice.

Iron sharpens iron



Aug 06, 2012 at 07:10 PM
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p.1 #5 · Hannah - Feedback please (be gentle)


I like 1 and 2 and they are a significantly better than 3. Good use of parapet as well.


Aug 06, 2012 at 07:15 PM
 



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p.1 #6 · Hannah - Feedback please (be gentle)


# 1 is really nice,, would like to see it about 1/2 again as large,,

nice work,,

Derry



Aug 06, 2012 at 07:54 PM
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p.1 #7 · Hannah - Feedback please (be gentle)


My preference is the order you presented, with one being the best by far. This is very nice with a charming expression. 2 looks like she is trying to hold the walls apart to avoid being crushed. 3 is way over cooked.


Aug 06, 2012 at 08:07 PM
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p.1 #8 · Hannah - Feedback please (be gentle)


#1 is very nice #2 is okay, I agree with darkening the rocks to make her stick out #3 makes her eyes look weird. I don't think you can fix that shot personally.


Aug 06, 2012 at 09:10 PM
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p.1 #9 · Hannah - Feedback please (be gentle)


Excellent presentation, and here's my $0.02...
1) nice composition, lighting is a bit flat and skin feels overprocessed (compare skin on hand to skin on face...looks like two different photos...and people)
2) love this one 10/10
3) dead eyes...you need to get a reflector or some kind of light into her eyes, and it's a little too contrasty...shadows feel too crushed

Overall, a good start!



Aug 08, 2012 at 02:44 PM





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