Home · Register · Search · View Winners · Software · Hosting · Software · Join Upload & Sell

Moderated by: Fred Miranda
Username   Password

  New fredmiranda.com Mobile Site
  New Feature: SMS Notification alert
  New Feature: Buy & Sell Watchlist
  

FM Forums | People Photography | Join Upload & Sell

  

Archive 2012 · Audrey
  
 
happyfamily
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #1 · Audrey


Had a session with this lovely girl yesterday, C&C please






Aug 06, 2012 at 08:05 AM
bbourizk
Offline
• • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #2 · Audrey


2and 3 look a little dark.
They look like a one light set up which i like and you can get great results from.



Aug 06, 2012 at 11:11 AM
Steady Hand
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #3 · Audrey


hello,

You made a nice set of photos of a pretty girl.

Good job.

My favorite is image#1.




Aug 06, 2012 at 04:48 PM
fstop212
Offline
• • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #4 · Audrey


bbourizk wrote:
2and 3 look a little dark.
They look like a one light set up which i like and you can get great results from.


+1
She is a pretty girl for sure. Just lighten up a bit and make them pop a bit.



Aug 06, 2012 at 04:54 PM
happyfamily
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #5 · Audrey


Thanks for the comment I'll try out next time


Aug 08, 2012 at 08:47 AM
happyfamily
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #6 · Audrey


Would this be better?



Aug 09, 2012 at 09:47 AM
douter
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #7 · Audrey


Very nice the 1st is my choice. Consider putting a little more space between the background and the model.
Douglas



Aug 09, 2012 at 12:01 PM
jfinite
Offline
• • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #8 · Audrey


1 - Consider cropping the top of her shoe.
2 - Looks underexposed. The extra one you added below is better.
3 - Nice.



Aug 10, 2012 at 02:11 PM
 



Lisa_Holloway
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #9 · Audrey


Beautiful girl - #1 is my favorite. I agree with brightening them up, and I'd move her further from the wall/backdrop next time to avoid the shadows in #2. She's also broad lit in #2 which makes her face look wider.


Aug 10, 2012 at 03:22 PM
Ed Peters
Offline
• • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #10 · Audrey


Maybe its my monitor (or old eyes), but the images don't sharp? Did you have to place the model so close to the background?


Aug 10, 2012 at 03:29 PM
happyfamily
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #11 · Audrey


douter wrote:
Very nice the 1st is my choice. Consider putting a little more space between the background and the model.
Douglas

Alright, will request them to have some spaces between the background.
Thanks



Aug 11, 2012 at 03:09 AM
happyfamily
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #12 · Audrey


jfinite wrote:
1 - Consider cropping the top of her shoe.
2 - Looks underexposed. The extra one you added below is better.
3 - Nice.

1 - Will crop it out.
2 - I'll fill in light for those underexposed
3 - Thanks.



Aug 11, 2012 at 03:11 AM
happyfamily
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #13 · Audrey


Lisa_Holloway wrote:
Beautiful girl - #1 is my favorite. I agree with brightening them up, and I'd move her further from the wall/backdrop next time to avoid the shadows in #2. She's also broad lit in #2 which makes her face look wider.

Thanks for your comment, will try better next time.



Aug 11, 2012 at 03:12 AM
happyfamily
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #14 · Audrey


Ed Peters wrote:
Maybe its my monitor (or old eyes), but the images don't sharp? Did you have to place the model so close to the background?

I reduced the sharpness of the pic a little.



Aug 11, 2012 at 03:13 AM
Osai
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #15 · Audrey


happyfamily wrote:
Would this be better?
http://i.imgur.com/e8sjE.jpg


No. Now you've made ot ordinary.



Aug 11, 2012 at 01:48 PM
Michaelparris
Offline
• • • •
Upload & Sell: On
p.1 #16 · Audrey


Osai wrote:
No. Now you've made ot ordinary.


Osai, I like you....



Aug 11, 2012 at 02:57 PM





FM Forums | People Photography | Join Upload & Sell

    
 

You are not logged in. Login or Register

Username   Password    Retrive password