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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Just around the bend...


More from the alps. A small waterfall this time.






(image updated after suggested improvements)

C+C always appreciated.

Brian

Edited on Aug 07, 2012 at 05:01 PM · View previous versions



Aug 06, 2012 at 07:15 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Just around the bend...


Somehow even though everything looks great on my fancy ass apple calibrated thunderbolt screen, it looks less
great at web resolution. In this case the left of the original picture looked too hot after I published to the web.

So heres another edit:







http://www.flickr.com/photos/slobobaby/7724257074/ at Flickr

Preferences?

Brian



Aug 06, 2012 at 10:07 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Just around the bend...


The second one. But the sky in the second looks way over done. need to brighten up that local adjustment. make sure when you export your exporting with the colour profile embedded into the image... most browsers will read it and adjust accordingly...


Aug 06, 2012 at 01:30 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Just around the bend...


Thanks Boris,

With the sky as bright as I think is OK:







How does that work for you?

Brian



Aug 06, 2012 at 02:04 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Just around the bend...


that's better but the issue i'm seeing (on my monitor..) is the visible area where you are blending the local adjustment with the darker terrain, smoothing that blend would make this shot a real winner!


Aug 06, 2012 at 02:40 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Just around the bend...


I like the second one. There is more "vibrancy" in the image.


Aug 06, 2012 at 03:08 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Just around the bend...


Hi Boris,
I presume you mean the lighter region at the base of the left near mountain.

How's this?







It was a little difficult to get rid of because it is a relic of the ND grad I used when I took the picture which
should probably have been placed a little lower when I took the picture.

Thanks for the chat .

Brian



Aug 06, 2012 at 04:06 PM
 

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Just around the bend...


Thanks for your comment AMaji.

Brian



Aug 06, 2012 at 04:08 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Just around the bend...


I am going to leave the fine tuning issues alone, as I am sure my screen is different from everyone else's.

I do want to say that I love the composition and subject. Super observation skills to see the possibilities and then build the shot as well it you did.

Gene



Aug 06, 2012 at 05:19 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Just around the bend...


Thanks Gene for the nice comments.

Brian



Aug 06, 2012 at 05:28 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Just around the bend...


I feel like I just watched an image birth.. Well done on the final image.

Charlie



Aug 07, 2012 at 12:40 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Just around the bend...


The last is the best rendition...nice comp and light


Aug 07, 2012 at 04:14 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Just around the bend...


Thanks for the comments.

Brian



Aug 07, 2012 at 04:59 PM





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