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Lots of good things going on here. She's a lovely young lady. The light is wonderful and you did a great job with the B&W conversion. It's good that she's turned so she isn't square to the camera.
Frankly, I'm more interested in Delaney than I am in that dark old pier. The dark, blobby character is a disturbing contrast to the soft nature of her portrait. By all means take a wide shot like this, but I hope you're also taking a closer photo, such as a clean waist up one.
Also, I can almost hear you telling her: "Why...Show more →
Thanks for the well written comment. You told it just as it happened. I was trying to get more into the frame, most of what I shoot tends to be very close. I have been trying to get more enviroment into the pictures, so that is why there was alot framed. This is something I am still working on, so your comments are well taken. Thanks again for your very constructive comments.