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Joel J Photogr
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p.1 #1 · Schuyler!


Hey
Shooting in Ontario for a month. Wanted to shoot a creative portrait of a good friend. Here it is, Raising the undead.







A huge thanks for taking the time to look at my work,
Joel



Aug 02, 2012 at 04:01 PM
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p.1 #2 · Schuyler!



Two thoughts, and it's just my opinion so take it as a grain of salt. This is your vision.

One, if the hands are of those of the undead, I just wonder if the color should be desaturated some, possibly more gray or white?

Two, I just think in a conceptual shot like this, the actor/model should not be looking at the camera. When the actor/model is not looking at the camera, it gives the viewer a different perspective of the image. Looking at the camera, I immediately think of this being a portrait, and for me that just doesn't work. For example, my first question would be: Why are those hands in the window of the room where this portrait is being taken. Again, just my thoughts.



Aug 02, 2012 at 04:24 PM
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p.1 #3 · Schuyler!


I don't have much to contribute. My thought is that a crop of the viewer's left might be appropriate. But it's up to you.


Aug 03, 2012 at 12:43 AM
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p.1 #4 · Schuyler!


Like the concept, def. different


Aug 04, 2012 at 05:50 PM
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p.1 #5 · Schuyler!


Thanks guys


Aug 08, 2012 at 07:33 PM





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