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D700 / 80-200 push pull.......old school (the lens that is).

Thanks for looking

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Aug 02, 2012 at 06:13 AM
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Hi Micheal, I think it's a very nice picture. I like the nice even light on her, how she stands out nicely with the light clothes and the repeating pattern of the stairs. The only thing I'm not super big on, is her expression. I can't quite explain it, it's sorta between a smile and a frown or something.

Out of curiosity, is the dark area to our left her shadow? It doesn't seem like the light would be hard enough to create that dark of a shadow and at the edges it kinda looks more like a stain, but the general shape looks like a shadow. It's kinda interesting and I actually stared at it for a long time, trying to figure it out - which of course is a good thing :-)

--David



Aug 02, 2012 at 11:46 PM
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I like the sepia tone here (normally not a fan of sepia, but i think it works here). As David said, the pattern on the stairs works too. I wonder if the light on her could be a little softer and not as prominet on the right side of the frame. probably hard to get the light much closer to her on the stairs, but its a thought! Nice shot.


Aug 03, 2012 at 01:52 AM
 



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neighbourboy wrote:
Hi Micheal, I think it's a very nice picture. I like the nice even light on her, how she stands out nicely with the light clothes and the repeating pattern of the stairs. The only thing I'm not super big on, is her expression. I can't quite explain it, it's sorta between a smile and a frown or something.

Out of curiosity, is the dark area to our left her shadow? It doesn't seem like the light would be hard enough to create that dark of a shadow and at the edges it kinda looks more like a stain, but the
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Light fall-off/shadow from softbox....I punched it up a bit in photoshop. Thanks for the comments.



Aug 03, 2012 at 05:09 AM
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I like the technical aspects of the photo. She looks pleasant enough in the expression, but lacking any kind of emotion, personality or connection with the camera.


Aug 03, 2012 at 03:32 PM
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ESC in KC wrote:
I like the technical aspects of the photo. She looks pleasant enough in the expression, but lacking any kind of emotion, personality or connection with the camera.


O.K.



Aug 03, 2012 at 03:33 PM





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