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p.1 #6 · FPJ - Birthdays and Batman | |
Cool, here are some quick thoughts.
2 - I'd like a little more depth of field to better include mom
3 - Maybe try swapping b and c? It would probably tell the story better, depending on your adherence to PJ
4 - I'd like to see this from the other side, with your boy's face being the main subject
5 - Nice portrait
6 - good effort Mom
8 - I like the negative space and the shadows on the wall
9 - cool processing
Dave
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