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Once I read through the posts and got the concept (and I can be a pretty out there sorta guy) I liked the concept but it wasn't a natural conclusion for me.
I definitely agree that the shoes don't say "newborn", that would help a lot.
But the biggest thing that blocked me from getting it was the child on tip toe - that was the action element... what I assumed the "story" was about and I wasn't coming up with "we're expecting". If the thread had no title, I'd have guessed something very different than a maternity portrait.
All that said, technically, a lovely shot and a certainly a creative idea.
IMHO, different shoes, pose the child like the parents and the shot would work.