Upload & Sell: Off
First...my standard intro to anyone "new" to me on this forum...
My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you.
Of course this may be your own "style" or your own "vision" and I suppose we can assume that the images look just like they do because that is exactly how you like them. That is OK too. It just shows that there are differences of "opinion" on what looks good. IF these are exactly what you want and like, then by all means continue making your images look like that and have fun doing it. As I always say: "Follow your own muse."
My Simple Suggestion: Avoid the posing shown in these photos.
Notice the hands...and/or lack of them.
Notice the legs...(see image #1 and how it appears she is a double-amputee).
Notice the low POV and how it looks under the jawline of image 2.
This is not all. But, it is all the time I have now.
I hope these comments help you.