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smurillo21 Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #1 · First paid gig? Need some feedback on portraits? Hey All, Just shot my first paid photo shoot. It was a family gathering and I thin it went great. Anyways, I wanted some feedback on two black and white portraits. Let me know what you think! Shot on Canon 5D Mark III with Canon 50mm 1.2L My First Official Shoot! by Santiago Murillo, on Flickr My First Official Shoot! by Santiago Murillo, on Flickr Jul 30, 2012 at 12:21 AM

nolaguy Offline • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #2 · First paid gig? Need some feedback on portraits? I really like these. 1 might be cropped to a portrait orientation and a bit of a shame the child's right arm was cut off in 2 but a great capture nonetheless. Jul 30, 2012 at 02:04 AM

Michaelparris Offline • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #3 · First paid gig? Need some feedback on portraits? 1 is a very nice shot with a bad crop IMHO 2 I like the subject to "lead" into the picture. If she was on the other side of the frame I think it would work better. As is I am led to her eyes then to the right arm then out of the frame. My 2 cents Iron sharpens iron Jul 30, 2012 at 02:17 AM

smurillo21 Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #4 · First paid gig? Need some feedback on portraits? Michealparris, How would have cropped #1? Jul 30, 2012 at 04:46 AM

smurillo21 Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #5 · First paid gig? Need some feedback on portraits? Ok, now I see it. Here's a fixed version: My First Official Shoot! by Santiago Murillo, on Flickr Jul 30, 2012 at 04:56 AM

nolaguy Offline • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #6 · First paid gig? Need some feedback on portraits? Something like this would be my suggestion. Please let me know if you'd like me to take down the edit. Best, Chuck Jul 30, 2012 at 05:12 AM

Michaelparris Offline • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #7 · First paid gig? Need some feedback on portraits? smurillo21 wrote: Ok, now I see it. Here's a fixed version: My First Official Shoot! by Santiago Murillo, on Flickr Looks nice.....I bet you could kick up the curves and levels adj. a notch and make it pop a bit more. Ad a pioneer woman "quick edge burn" action with a low opacity and you'll have a winner Jul 30, 2012 at 05:40 AM

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