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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Annelies

This is the first time I post some pictures in here. Constructive criticism is always welcome

These are from a shoot a couple of weeks ago:





Edit: looks like the images don't show up. Anyone can help me out with how to embed them in the post
Edit 2: On another host, it seems to work.

Jul 29, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Kevin Daly
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Annelies

Love 3 and 4.... although it looks like she's going to trip up in 4

Jul 29, 2012 at 01:40 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Annelies

#2 and #3 are just really nice...though all are very good.
Like the pp on these....nice job all around...
and, oh, a beautiful model too.


Jul 29, 2012 at 03:20 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Annelies

Like it, good sky, nice model. Clothes & styling could be more interesting. 1-2-3, ditch 4.

Jul 29, 2012 at 03:24 PM
Jim Rickards
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Annelies

Nice set. A few nits:

I like #1 - how you've framed in with the background.

#2 Seems zoomed in a bit too much. More light in the eyes could help too.

#3 Shouldn't the whole hand be in the frame?

#4 Showing the whole body (compared to #1) is my usual choice. Not sure I like the pose in this one as much as #1. A lower camera angle would place her head against the sky - an improvement.

Jul 29, 2012 at 10:08 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Annelies

Thanks a lot for the useful comments everyone!

Wolfr: Agree on the styling, it was also an impromptu shoot so we had to do with what she came up with. However I liked how the colors of her clothes matched with the surroundings in 1 and 4.
Working on that though, I set my goal for this summer to overhaul my portfolio a bit, with more work that would appeal stylists or local boutiques a bit more to lend out some stuff once in a while.

2: I could have used a little fill flash for the eyes or a reflector indeed. Being an overcast day, the light looked fine how it was, but seeing it afterwards it could use some more pop indeed.
2 & 3: Yeah, I tend to like to go quite close for portraits, which often involves some cropping of hands or other body-parts. Personally it didn't really bother me in those pictures, but I understand that opinions may differ.
4: Good point about the lower angle, I should do that more often.

And oh yeah, the model was a real natural beauty. Almost perfect skin. Barely any make-up and retouching is limited to an absolute minimum in these photos

Jul 29, 2012 at 10:40 PM

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