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My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you.
Of course this may be your own "style" or your own "vision" and I suppose we can assume that the images look just like they do because that is exactly how you like them. That is OK too. It just shows that there are differences of "opinion" on what looks good. IF these are exactly what you want and like, then by all means continue making your images look like that and have fun doing it. As I always say: "Follow your own muse."
I like the photo. Nice and simple. looks good in BW.
I like the subtle texture (of the fabric).
My Simple Suggestion:
IF the out of focus areas (looking like some bad "cloud" blurring) are "blurred" somehow by you in PP, then I think they are unnecessary and draw attention to themselves (for my eye).
I hope these comments help you.