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I like the selection. Perhaps darker negative space to place more visual emphasis on the sombrero and an small asymmetric vignette?
Thanks for looking and helpful re-work. Glad you like the concept - trying to step back from "boring". Taken at the 7's tournament. I had the sameness of most of the other captures taken thus far etched into my mind at the time.
Bob's self-critique: like the diagonal division of frame, tension between positive and negative spaces, sharp, nice bokeh, nice tone, intersecting lines suggested by brim and peak of sombrero, could be not so bright sombrero. Background needs work, which you have nicely addressed.
Thanks again for looking and illustrative rework,