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Corey Jenkins
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Hey everyone! I've really been trying to get better at this fitness stuff. I decided to shoot on the beach in Cardiff, CA for this one. To my surprise I got a lot sandier than I thought lol I think I got a couple good shots out of it though although a could be improved on for next time. Let me know what you think!

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This isnt much of a consistent series but I wasn't really going for that. Wanted to try out different looks, styles, and emotions instead. Anyway looking forward to hearing what you have to say and how I can improve!

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Jul 27, 2012 at 05:27 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Beach Fitness


Good stuff. My daughter's a distance runner and I know how hard it is to get action shots that look decent. #3 FTW! IMHO #1 and #7 are the weakest of the bunch, not that I could do any better. Overall, a great job of capturing the life of a runner; stretching, sweating, running tunes and earbuds. I just keep going back to #3.


Jul 27, 2012 at 05:47 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Beach Fitness


love #2 and #10

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Jul 27, 2012 at 06:05 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Beach Fitness


Good series, great looking lady, nice location. The left leg looks like a prosthetic limb in #1 - don't know the origin of that appearance, or whether that is the intent.

John Caldwell



Jul 27, 2012 at 06:18 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Beach Fitness


#3 is excellent - good idea


Jul 27, 2012 at 06:24 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Beach Fitness


Excellent images..... however, I'm not big on the horizons being so tilted.

Bob



Jul 27, 2012 at 07:51 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Beach Fitness


Timing for #3 was good. Rest all excellent too.



Jul 27, 2012 at 08:33 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Beach Fitness


like these a lot...3 is great


Jul 28, 2012 at 03:58 AM
 



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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Beach Fitness


Awesome!


Jul 28, 2012 at 06:25 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Beach Fitness


Damn, these are good! Love the variety you have in this set.

#1 Love the composition and the timing (foot just about to land). Great camera angle and use of a leading line.

#2 Again the composition is well chosen. Nice capture of the muscle stretch.

#3 Motion blur, great camera perspective.

#4 Another typical fitness scene.

#5 After the run. Sweat dripping on the chin. Wow.

#6 Perfect pose. Look how boldly she is shown against the background. Another Wow.

#7 I don't like the arm positions in this one. I'd probably love it if it was alone, but with all these other good ones .....

#8 Again really nice. When I study this for a while I get a bit of a posed feeling. Such a minor nit, though.

#9, #10 & #11. Great shots.

Can this man take a bad shot?

Give your model my compliments for a great job too.

Robert mentioned the tilt of the horizons. I found the model was so much the star of each frame - standing out so strongly against each carefully chosen background - that the backgrounds became secondary and whether they had a tilt or not didn't register with me at all.

In my opinion, the model needs to be the star, the one place I am immediately attracted too. The backgrounds are something that are "just there" - not interfering or distracting. Adding to the shot, but not taking away. I think you did that in each shot.

It will be hard to improve on these.



Jul 28, 2012 at 10:09 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Beach Fitness


#1 and #9. Style.


Jul 28, 2012 at 09:40 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Beach Fitness


A vote for #10.


Jul 29, 2012 at 04:08 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Beach Fitness


I like 'em. Very professional.


Jul 29, 2012 at 03:33 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Beach Fitness


I love them.

Care to share some lighting info on 1,2,3 and 9 ?



Jul 29, 2012 at 04:30 PM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Beach Fitness


You did an excellent job with these.


Jul 29, 2012 at 06:18 PM





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