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My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you.
Of course this may be your own "style" or your own "vision" and I suppose we can assume that the images look just like they do because that is exactly how you like them. That is OK too. It just shows that there are differences of "opinion" on what looks good. IF these are exactly what you want and like, then by all means continue making your images look like that and have fun doing it. As I always say: "Follow your own muse."
I have read about your preference for unusual framing and closeup. That is your chosen style.
I have enjoyed seeing most of your posted photos (I have seen lately, have not been on FM much this past year or two).
But, this one appears different (not as good as earlier photos).
At a glance it appears "squashed" as if his face is pressed up against a plane of glass (picture plane).
Probably has to do with the framing, editing, lighting, and lack of depth in the scene/image (which is related to the closeup and the vignette, etc.).
I hope these comments help you.