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I really like both shots. In the first shot, I like the pose, their looks feel very natural and original, I don't mind that they're hunched over, it's very cool. I also like the processing.
The one thing I would have changed is that I would have paid more attention to the background. More specifically, the dark shadows in the upper right corner are distracting, as well as that clock in the upper center. If the background was clean, it would be easier to just keep the focus on the guys.