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| p.1 #2 · Orange County Wedding (30 + pics ) - simply beautiful |
Wow, 152 views and no comments?!? OK, I'll start.
Overall I see good imagery with a lack of a story, in addition to some minor technical critiques;
IMO, several of these are overexposed and lack contrast (9,10,11) and in 14 there are some distracting elements that take away from what is otherwise a pretty good photo of the groom, but what's up with the yellow dolly and the John Deere looking lawn mower in the background? Try as I might to look at him, my eyes are just drawn to the YELLOW dolly.
18 and 19 are decent (and creative - 18 specifically, great pose) group shots, but I'm wondering why you chose black and white (18) and the background on 19 to my eye is just blown a little too much. It may just be your style, but I may have vignetted it a bit to bring back some details...
Again, I see *mostly* good imagery (in your defense it looks like mid-day sun and that can be a bear to balance the ambient and the subject without crushing the highlights and back yards can pose their own set of challenges with regard to variety of locations and creativity) and some good composition, but overall it seems like a lot of bits and pieces and not the whole story - could be the lack of extras as you described. Did you shoot this one alone?