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Hey Lionel,
Cool stuff here. #1 looks pretty cool, you painted that just right. It looks like the color is frssh paint and it's dripping along the rock.
With #2, I really like what you were going for, and that is definitely a compositiion that I have never seen before. 2 things, 1st, I would use a layer mask and try to get rid of that triangle of light in the lower left. That sticks out. Then the other is the sky is too dark in that one. To light paint like you did is pretty intricate. So I think I would take a shot where you had gotten the light painting pretty good like this, and then I would have made sure I had taken a shot just for the stars. Then with the Layer Mask, I would combine the two.
Keep it up, if you look through here at all, you will see lot's of star shots. It's like it's a Summer of Stars in here.
Jim
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