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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Palouse barn


Came across this old barn in the Palouse region. Colour version is very nice with bright yellow forground. Converted to B&W. What are your thoughts on this.

thanks,

harry





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Jul 22, 2012 at 02:59 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Palouse barn


Hi Harry,
A place I'd love to visit!
I think the BW conversion leaves the scene flat in that sense that there does not feel to be enough tonal separation of the barn from the background. Sky is kind of featureless as well, but what can you do?
I suspect the color works better here.
As is, I'd add a bit of vignette beyond the apparent burning in the lower quarters, maybe a subtle gradient to the sky to again contain the eye.
I like the toning. Feels right for this image.
Scott



Jul 22, 2012 at 05:24 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Palouse barn


I think it's a beautiful shot, but I do agree with Scott that it is lacking and somewhat flat. I'd play with it some more to see if you can't get some separation.


Jul 24, 2012 at 11:39 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Palouse barn


Also agree with the other two comments. Nice composition, but to me there's not enough separation with the barn and the hills right behind it.


Jul 26, 2012 at 03:08 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Palouse barn


I like it just the way it is Harry. Very nice.

Greg



Jul 27, 2012 at 01:49 PM





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