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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Couple of shots for critique


Been a very long time since I've posted. Trying to experiment a little more. Here are a couple of recent shots for comment and critique:

http://jkmadison.com/Family/May-2012/i-tFnxbgN/0/L/Mackenzie-L.jpg


[NAPP Image of the Week back in May]
http://jkmadison.com/Family/May-2012/i-Xvc8JmL/0/L/AinsleyHeadshot-L.jpg


http://jkmadison.com/Family/March-2012/i-VrTWcQL/0/L/CMG005273-Edit-L.jpg


[Yes, I need a hair and fashion asst. ]
http://jkmadison.com/Family/June-2012/i-M7r9k4Z/0/L/AubFashion-L.jpg


http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n588/Jkm4au/Photography/Austin2.jpg





Thanks in advance for any input



Jul 20, 2012 at 10:05 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Couple of shots for critique


I love them all!


Jul 21, 2012 at 12:01 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Couple of shots for critique


Howdy!

Been a long time.

Looked over these and see these do look different from what I remember seeing you post before (except for your daughter, who looks a bit older here, naturally).

My Simple Suggestion: Avoid showing the chair shown in image #1. Why? Because at a glance it makes the kid look like she is very fat or melted (Jabba the Hut look). I think it would be much nicer to see her alone (no chair).

She is a cute kid, and appears like a nice subject for expressions, so I see lots of potential for you with her.

Hope that helps.



Jul 21, 2012 at 04:22 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Couple of shots for critique


Nice work, on 1 I would crop more like you have on 2.


Jul 21, 2012 at 08:45 PM
 



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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Couple of shots for critique


Steady and jfinite,

Glad to see y'all are still around here. Thanks for the comments as always.

Concerning the chair in #1, it's the only way for her to sit up currently. Tried to cut the chair out (since she's already composited on the background), but it made her look even more awkward. Had some other images with her arms on the side, but her mom couldn't get past this expression.

Again, thanks for the input as always.



Jul 21, 2012 at 10:00 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Couple of shots for critique


howdy again,

I should have added in my original post the following:

Your photos look nice. The use of light and color is good, and the indoor/studio shot of your daughter (and the little one on blue background) both look nicely made and "professional."

Keep up the good work!



Jul 31, 2012 at 11:45 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Couple of shots for critique


Good work with the lighting overall. Posing is less interesting with the possible exception of #2.


Aug 02, 2012 at 04:32 AM





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