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just a few for critique! (maybe more than a few)

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Jul 13, 2012 at 08:42 AM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · nyc engagement (just a few)

dood. 1+4

Jul 13, 2012 at 08:48 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · nyc engagement (just a few)

i like #2 man.

Jul 13, 2012 at 09:21 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · nyc engagement (just a few)

The shadow in #4 is so cool. Wow!

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Jul 13, 2012 at 09:38 AM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · nyc engagement (just a few)

I really like these! Only thing I can suggest is in the posing of 3. Her legs are hyper extended and his arm is kind of just laying there all bleh. But honestly that's nitpicking. These are great, and I love your compositions and color.

Jul 13, 2012 at 10:02 AM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · nyc engagement (just a few)

I agree about the hanging arm, but it's damn near impossible to screw up a shot with those legs. Just sayin'...

Jul 13, 2012 at 10:10 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · nyc engagement (just a few)

#1 is a great shot!
The rest are fine for me as well. Kind of wish you could see more of her on the shadow shot but its good if you like it and they like it.

Jul 13, 2012 at 10:28 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · nyc engagement (just a few)

#4 got me...It looked like he was peeing...then I saw the shadow and her hands...I went from WTF to AWESOME! That and #1 very good!

Jul 13, 2012 at 11:04 AM

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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · nyc engagement (just a few)

yeah 1 and 4 are pretty awesome. Leaves me wondering how much more you could have "worked" number 4...

Jul 13, 2012 at 12:13 PM

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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · nyc engagement (just a few)

# 1 is phenomenal. It should be an advertisement. The rest are good but I think the sillhouette is weaker than the rest. I think the composition could be a little better if it was easier to see their whole body and less of the tree.

Jul 13, 2012 at 12:24 PM

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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · nyc engagement (just a few)

#1 is by far my favorite.. it has such an awesome feel to it

Jul 13, 2012 at 12:30 PM

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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · nyc engagement (just a few)

Photo 1 and 4 are awesome, nice job!

Jul 13, 2012 at 01:05 PM

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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · nyc engagement (just a few)

1+4 for me.

Jul 13, 2012 at 01:56 PM

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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · nyc engagement (just a few)

1 and 2 are juicy.

for #5, i wish her heel was higher so theres separation from the other blacks.

Jul 13, 2012 at 02:19 PM

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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · nyc engagement (just a few)

I like 1 and 4. The only thing i noticed with the first image is that the woman's neck appears to have a lump on the left side. should be an easy fix in PS. Doesn't bother me personally but I know girls that'd be quick to scrutinize their own photo and they always seem to look for what is wrong with the image.

Jul 13, 2012 at 02:54 PM

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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · nyc engagement (just a few)

Thanks everyone! These are my college friends who recently got engaged and I'm really happy for them. I was honored but a bit nervous to shoot their engagement photos because I know them so well - is that weird? In the end they loved their photos and I'm happy if they're happy

I agree with the things pointed out especially the heel being higher and arm laying there. Can't wait to shoot their part 2 in the Fall!

Jul 17, 2012 at 06:40 PM

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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · nyc engagement (just a few)

#4 is fire! Just a little too close to the right. I like #1 too.

Jul 24, 2012 at 12:11 AM

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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · nyc engagement (just a few)

#1 - nice, but I wish her head/nose were on the camera side.

#3 - her knees. I mentioned this before somewhere else, but I prefer that women's knees be slightly bent, so it doesn't look like her knees and locked and creates a "gathering" of skin right on top of her knees.

I like #4, too. Maybe her leg could also be peeking out from the right and his hand can be on her thigh... slightly pulling up her skirt.

Jul 24, 2012 at 01:14 AM


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