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p.1 #1 · Nelly & Jose e-sess


I shot this engagement session for a couple of friends last week in Boston. A mutual friend recommended we go to the Larz Anderson park, so we did. I had no idea how beautiful this tiny patch of green can be, and I lived fairly close to it for 5 years.

This is my second engagement shoot, so any C&C would be highly appreciated. Thanks!




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Jul 10, 2012 at 12:52 AM
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p.1 #2 · Nelly & Jose e-sess


I like 14 and 15. I like the glare on 13 but a different composition or pose would have made the image a bit more effective, IMO.

For 11, I would prefer the woman's face to be equally sharp as her fiancee. I'm not too fond of the images by the pond.

I consider myself a rookie so my comments are more from like a typical picture viewer rather than a pro-photog. Thanks for sharing!



Jul 10, 2012 at 04:30 AM
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p.1 #3 · Nelly & Jose e-sess


The main thing I noticed was limited skin definition.
How much have you glossed the skin in post-processing?
If you like that look, that's fine. Not everyone does for engagement/wedding shots.



Jul 11, 2012 at 02:35 PM
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p.1 #4 · Nelly & Jose e-sess


good job overall, and I like 14-17 the best out of the set

I found the set to have too many "look over there (points finger off in the distance) shots"; 2,5,6,8,11, which I don't think work very well since it looks the connection with each other

Also, your BW in 10 looks fine, but in 6 it loses the facial details & too much contrast




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