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Thanks for sharing! Here's some CC for you based on my opinion
#1 and #3 - the DOF is way too shallow and doesn't really work in my opinion. How about another approach by photographing the text directly straight on, so that the entire text is in the same focal plane and in focus, still at a large aperture to get background blur, and add in a vignette to accentuate the text, rather than this side on shallow DOF approach
#20 - imo heads should be together
#19 - nice but a bit tight, I think the arms and torsos should be included
#18 - dude looks a bit awkward, probably needed more of a casual look
#16,17 - I like 16 better, but consider cleaning up the walls and adding a vignette?
#15 - don't like the centred composition
#14 - too tight?
#8 - too much background distraction? tighter crop, better focus on the people inside the car