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Kevin Daly
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · M+M Engagement - Ottawa


Here are some photos from Thursdays engagement shoot in Ottawa. Mike is a firefighter with the city and Marlene is a teacher.

CC always welcome

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-F3TLrDW/0/L/001-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-qFxjXLX/0/L/001-3-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-NFt8Bk5/0/L/001-4-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-k8MqCXr/0/L/001-21-L.jpg

5
http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-FH7HxJn/0/L/001-34-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-WRT3j2k/0/L/001-53-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-TkG48qV/0/L/001-73-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-zj5xDkW/0/L/0011-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-XRqbV5F/0/L/0011-19-L.jpg

10.
http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-qkQ3hS8/0/L/001-91-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/23724236_4kvgKS#!i=1921201406&k=mF2g4Sv

12
http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-cdCrdCZ/0/L/001-119-L.jpg

13
http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-zd7vnhc/0/L/001-122-L.jpg

14
http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-pDcsgck/0/L/001-163-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-NztjpdZ/0/L/001-180-L.jpg

16
http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-4CdRqfn/0/L/001-190-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-9SZmRrh/0/L/001-193-L.jpg

18
http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-rQQZ99C/0/L/001-202-L.jpg

19
http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-3qdRtPS/0/L/001-246-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-7ZkXVDX/0/L/001-252-L.jpg

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http://www.kevindalyphotography.ca/Other/M-M-engagement/i-RJSLVnk/0/L/001-259-L.jpg



Jun 23, 2012 at 02:54 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · M+M Engagement - Ottawa


Thanks for sharing! Here's some CC for you based on my opinion

#1 and #3 - the DOF is way too shallow and doesn't really work in my opinion. How about another approach by photographing the text directly straight on, so that the entire text is in the same focal plane and in focus, still at a large aperture to get background blur, and add in a vignette to accentuate the text, rather than this side on shallow DOF approach

#20 - imo heads should be together

#19 - nice but a bit tight, I think the arms and torsos should be included

#18 - dude looks a bit awkward, probably needed more of a casual look

#16,17 - I like 16 better, but consider cleaning up the walls and adding a vignette?

#15 - don't like the centred composition

#14 - too tight?

#8 - too much background distraction? tighter crop, better focus on the people inside the car



Jun 24, 2012 at 10:33 AM
Kevin Daly
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · M+M Engagement - Ottawa


Thanks Dawel Ye


Jun 25, 2012 at 02:52 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · M+M Engagement - Ottawa


I like #4, #13 and #16. I think Dawel Ye's idea of cleaning up the wall in #16 is a good idea. I really like #7 as well, it just seems a little crooked to me.... Thanks for putting these up.

Andrew



Jun 25, 2012 at 11:31 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · M+M Engagement - Ottawa


15 could be so awesome -- what a cool spot

Bring back another couple and do this:
Last smidgen of sunlight.
Longer lens wide open.
Couple interaction.

The center comp could be ok if these elements were at play.



Jun 25, 2012 at 12:46 PM





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