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Kind of lost some motivation and haven't really been shooting lately so a bit rusty. Only tweaked the exposure, vignetting, and slight sharpening. Any comments or criticisms would be appreciated!

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Thanks for looking!



Jun 10, 2012 at 08:10 AM
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A beautiful girl. The thing that bothers me is the abdomen of the model in the last (third) photo. It may have just been shot at an odd angle but it looks as if she is pregnant.


Jun 10, 2012 at 09:13 AM
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AlainHP wrote:
A beautiful girl. The thing that bothers me is the abdomen of the model in the last (third) photo. It may have just been shot at an odd angle but it looks as if she is pregnant.


Yeah, it's because of the angle but I don't know how to fix it



Jun 10, 2012 at 05:31 PM
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bsaber wrote:
Yeah, it's because of the angle but I don't know how to fix it


use your liquify tool to gently ease it in without distorting her arm.



Jun 10, 2012 at 06:20 PM
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It looks weird though.


Jun 10, 2012 at 07:24 PM
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I think using the liquify "warp" tool to ease it in without moving/distorting the arm is likely impossible, since there's no gap between the arm and the belly.

Hope you don't mind me taking a stab at it. I'll take it down immediately if you do.

I used the Pucker with a large-ish brush size on the entire area, then the Warp tool with a smaller brush size to straighten out the 'bent' edge of the arm.



Edited on Dec 16, 2012 at 11:34 PM · View previous versions



Jun 10, 2012 at 09:55 PM
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No, I don't mind at all. That definitely looks better. What's the Pucker?


Jun 10, 2012 at 09:59 PM
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noooooooooo dont liquefy!!!



Jun 11, 2012 at 06:04 AM
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Doesn't seem like much can be done to fix it. Oh well...


Jun 11, 2012 at 06:11 AM
 



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It's one of the brush options in the Liquify tool (the 'warp' tool that most people use is only the first, an arguably the least useful, part)


Jun 11, 2012 at 05:23 PM
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Oh, that just goes to show how much I know about the Liquify tool


Jun 11, 2012 at 06:50 PM
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very nice photos! i like the 1st photo the most. 2nd pic has a red mark under her arm, perhaps blur it or something?


Jun 12, 2012 at 01:16 AM
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The abdomen isn't the problem in that picture. It's the patch of light. Her left breast looks lifted up, and the cup and bottom of the bra are just wonky. It shouldn't be hanging like that and it doesn't match the right one at all.


Jun 12, 2012 at 01:24 AM
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Yep beautiful, and yeah the white ribbon on the brazzier makes the rest of the odd pose really pop.. so it starts to look all Picaso..

Love 1 and #2 is killer.. just enough shown to trip the imagination wheels turning



Jun 12, 2012 at 01:33 AM
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Okay, I see now that it's a ribbon. I was trying to wrap my head around the physics of breast placement.


Jun 13, 2012 at 12:30 PM
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Fantastic pics, good work.


Jun 14, 2012 at 09:10 AM
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Thanks everyone. So for the last pic what should I do to avoid a repeat of this?


Jun 15, 2012 at 01:40 AM
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She is not fat so don't take this the wrong way, have her arch the back a little in the opposet direction that she does in that photo and have her suck in the belly ..it seems the position of her arm, ribbon and belly cause the optical illusion. could also flatten the ribbon on the bra so it doesn't stick out as much..


Aug 03, 2012 at 01:24 AM





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