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| p.1 #19 · 9 birds from Centennial Park |
Tim Kuhn wrote:
I'll try to respond with the understanding of all the comments you have made Mirek.
Thanks so much
1 I can see the artistry, it is a nice moment and the background rocks. The shot tells a story
2 I don't see the artistry, to my eye the shot is awkward
It's not the best shot in my view. I chose it for the patterns but perhaps not strong enough.
3 & 4 even though both are going away the strong eye redeems them, I like the bisected background and the techs look good
5 yes a big bird! You did an admirable job with the lighting and its nicely detailed
6 lets just say I don't see what you are seeing
I see Micheal Kenna style of imagery
7 my pick of the bunch even though I am subjected to a couple of scrums a day Maybe crop off some on the right and add to the left if you can
I prefer the scene the way it is as I wanted to retain the branch at lower right.
8 I like the chaotic action but it lacks a strong focal point
I felt empowered and inspired by Art Wolfe ideals here ... strong patterns, your eyes are led from the wing to the head of the duck buried in the splash
9 I love these guys, this one may have benefited from a higher vantage point so that you would lose some of the foreground stuff
Agree—will ask her to wait next time
There you have it Mirek, the rambling thoughts of a software engineer taking a break
Thank *you* much for stopping and comprehensive comments!