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redclay92
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p.1 #1 · Masked Scruffiness Opinions


Your C&C on both processing and composition.








Mar 05, 2012 at 12:28 AM
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p.1 #2 · Masked Scruffiness Opinions


Curious at apparatus ... reality for bearded workers, or fantasy solution ??


Mar 05, 2012 at 02:20 AM
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p.1 #3 · Masked Scruffiness Opinions


Composition is lovely. I like it, especially the use of colours.

The colours are thought out well and work well, mostly.

For me the colour of the reflection in the mask just jars ever so slightly. It might be clashing with the vignette blue, I can't quite lay my finger on what would feel right. I just know what feels wrong!

Is it a pink refection from a blue sky that I'm not believing? Try putting a very subtle pinky sunset sky in the back? (or a more blue reflection?)



Mar 05, 2012 at 12:28 PM
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p.1 #4 · Masked Scruffiness Opinions


So something more like this?







Mar 05, 2012 at 01:14 PM
 

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p.1 #5 · Masked Scruffiness Opinions


Damn, that was a subtle change!

I prefer the original now!

I'm coming to like this picture quite a lot, you know.
I'm not sure you didn't have it spot on already.

Nice work, P



Mar 05, 2012 at 01:45 PM
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p.1 #6 · Masked Scruffiness Opinions


Very interesting photo with great post processing. I like your choice of point of view. The photo raises a lot of questions, there are so many incongruities.


Mar 05, 2012 at 01:49 PM
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p.1 #7 · Masked Scruffiness Opinions


Re-work looks great to me - I like the slight bleach-bypass look (at least that is what I see on this non-calibrated monitor).

Bob



Mar 05, 2012 at 02:16 PM





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